MB’s Reviews > Making Waves > Status Update
MB
is 78% done
The premise is REALLY good. The writing is not my favorite. It’s just kind of…sequential and not emotional or descriptive. “Remy said this and I liked it. I was starting to feel things. I liked him a lot.” I feel the characters but don’t feel the writing.
— Jun 25, 2024 12:54AM
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