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Chase W
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It was extremely difficult to read in the beginning, I mean five sentences to say she fell down the stairs and it hurt is a lot.
I feel the main character is a Mary sue, saying she can beat anyone in a fight yet always reminds the reader how “petite” and “small” she is. I wish her abilities were geared more to favor her size, like agility instead of “I’ll beat him soundly” because no you won’t.
— Jun 25, 2024 07:36AM
I feel the main character is a Mary sue, saying she can beat anyone in a fight yet always reminds the reader how “petite” and “small” she is. I wish her abilities were geared more to favor her size, like agility instead of “I’ll beat him soundly” because no you won’t.
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Chase W
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I should not be reading about how you eat your food and in what order!!! I do NOT care that you salt your eggs and drink water!
— Jun 25, 2024 07:59AM
