Emma’s Reviews > The Crown and the Collar > Status Update
Emma
is 15% done
I don't mind a book written in 1st person POV. What my brain doesn't like is reading the word "just" again and again. It's easy to overuse. This book definitely has that
— Jun 28, 2024 06:58PM
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Emma
is 10% done
So far, we are plopped into the story, and we hit the ground running. I'm enjoying Peter's character. He's very kind and giving, which is something Ashen is wonderful at writing.
I am noticing some inconsistencies with content, however. Such as, in ch. 1, the horses are named Abby and Kino, but in ch. 2 they are now *Bess* and Kino 🤔 Also, where is Coleman's Bakery (#5) on the 2nd map?
— May 02, 2024 06:32PM
I am noticing some inconsistencies with content, however. Such as, in ch. 1, the horses are named Abby and Kino, but in ch. 2 they are now *Bess* and Kino 🤔 Also, where is Coleman's Bakery (#5) on the 2nd map?
