JJH--Judy’s Reviews > Nail Down > Status Update
JJH--Judy
is 36% done
Cute story so far. Like the characters. Ex SEAL. clumsy h. Timeline jumps a little, but not bad. Good writing style. Characters actually act "adult" to me--talk things out
— Jan 31, 2016 06:59AM
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JJH--Judy’s Previous Updates
JJH--Judy
is 99% done
3 1/2-4 stars. Like writing, never did feel connection. Something still missing
— Jan 31, 2016 03:47PM
JJH--Judy
is 88% done
Still liking characters, but having problem with their connection. Not sure how quit is going to give me a believe HEA in the last part
— Jan 31, 2016 03:23PM
JJH--Judy
is 46% done
Feel like something is missing--not sure what. Things just sort of ends, then it picks up next day
— Jan 31, 2016 07:45AM
