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Here’s an example: “As a doctor, I think about all situations a person can be in and I like to be prepared for everything. Being over prepared is better than not being prepared. It does a person no good for me to be underprepared and they die. Too much guilt.” 

This looks like someone who was in high school wrote this story. The sentence structure is awkward or just wrong.