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is 19% done
Three to four pages of absolutely pure dialogue and barely any direction does not make for good reading.
— Feb 04, 2016 12:43PM
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Mary
is 4% done
I literally have no idea what's going on in this book. None. There's a lot of unnecessary description and its bogging down whatever action is happening. She had a bad dream and then maybe her shadow split? Honestly, I'm guessing here.
— Dec 22, 2015 09:09PM
