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Amanda
Amanda is 55% done
And the woman who has some sort of history with the "hero" - what exactly is not yet revealed - is dressed so that "little is left to imagination" and she's full of botox.

WHY DO AUTHORS CONTINUE TO DO THIS SHITTY TYPE OF THING? Why can't we have a perfectly normal woman? Just once? Is that too much to ask for?
Feb 05, 2016 10:50AM
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Amanda
Amanda is finished
I SO DID SHE THAT ENDING COMING.

Not impressed.
Feb 05, 2016 11:39AM
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Amanda
Amanda is 73% done
“I know better than to trust someone completely, especially with something important, something that could weaken you."

Which is why he hired a woman he'd met once and knew close to nothing about to marry him for business reasons.

#romancelogic
Feb 05, 2016 11:18AM
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Amanda
Amanda is 57% done
"You said this agreement was built on trust. When were you going to tell me about Darlene Mc-huge-boobs in there?”

Okay, maybe she should take a look at how misogynistic she is herself before passing judgement on others.
Feb 05, 2016 10:55AM
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Amanda
Amanda is 57% done
“What kind of woman forgets a half-a-million dollar diamond ring?”

One who obviously wanted one worth a million dollar. /sarcasm
Feb 05, 2016 10:54AM
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Amanda
Amanda is 55% done
I had only just met John but he didn’t come across like a misogynistic prick.

I'd say take a look at your fake boyfriend before passing judgement.
Feb 05, 2016 10:53AM
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Amanda
Amanda is 46% done
And for fuck's sake, does this man do anything beside growl?
Feb 05, 2016 09:49AM
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Amanda
Amanda is 44% done
“It’s an ear infection. I use to get them before finals a lot.”

Let me guess; antibiotics and - since the "hero" doesn't want them as stated in this whole agreement - surprise baby?
Feb 05, 2016 09:47AM
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Amanda
Amanda is 36% done
“I'm sorry, it’s just that most women wouldn’t want to work if they didn't have to."

What the fuck is he basing this on?
Feb 05, 2016 08:45AM
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Amanda
Amanda is 26% done
So he's asking her, a woman he spent the night with and don't know first thing about, to marry him for business reasons.

Why not, you know, ask a woman you know and trust? Logic has once again lost to romance logic.
Feb 04, 2016 10:26PM
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Amanda
Amanda is 22% done
This is well written so far but I'm not sensing a good plot. And there's slutshaming. And I'm undecided on the hero so far; he comes off like a douche.
Feb 04, 2016 01:14PM
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