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Martin
is on page 290 of 911
I think the second part should have come first, but I believe the story is still interesting although very long and thesaurus-y.
— Feb 05, 2016 11:33AM
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Martin
is on page 855 of 911
Got to love false tension that involves introducing characters I either can't remember or are actually new to avoid getting to the good part. All the more thesaurus-y as well. At its core, this book is great but there's too much of it and it's quite a mess.
— Feb 07, 2016 03:21PM
Martin
is on page 657 of 911
Better exposition than I was expecting but still just exposition. The writing is lovely, but there's lots of it.
— Feb 06, 2016 07:20AM
Martin
is on page 555 of 911
Let's go back in time and learn things we already knew about the characters for a third time. Love the writing, but I'm sure all this back-tracking could be cut down.
— Feb 06, 2016 05:22AM

