A K’s Reviews > The Sun and Her Flowers > Status Update
A K
is on page 234 of 256
“the necessity to protect you overcame me
i love you too much
…”
Okay, this one is also good! Rupi see this is why i get sad when your poems are just sentences- YOU NEED TO ACTUALLY USE YOUR WORDS GIRLIE POP!!!
— Jul 12, 2024 11:46AM
i love you too much
…”
Okay, this one is also good! Rupi see this is why i get sad when your poems are just sentences- YOU NEED TO ACTUALLY USE YOUR WORDS GIRLIE POP!!!
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A K
is on page 210 of 256
“i long to be a lily pad”
me when i long to be a lily pad
— Jul 12, 2024 11:39AM
me when i long to be a lily pad
A K
is on page 203 of 256
“when i go from this place
dress the porch with garlands
…”
also like this one! nice
— Jul 12, 2024 11:38AM
dress the porch with garlands
…”
also like this one! nice
A K
is on page 174 of 256
“when you are
full
and i am
full
we are two suns”
GIRL.
— Jul 12, 2024 11:09AM
full
and i am
full
we are two suns”
GIRL.
A K
is on page 172 of 256
“the moon is responsible
for pulling tides
out of still water
darling
i am the still water
and you are the moon”
…you do realize that if you had only eluded to the other person being a moon and you being still water, then this would’ve been a much stronger poem than straight out telling us?
— Jul 12, 2024 11:08AM
for pulling tides
out of still water
darling
i am the still water
and you are the moon”
…you do realize that if you had only eluded to the other person being a moon and you being still water, then this would’ve been a much stronger poem than straight out telling us?
A K
is on page 148 of 256
“i will welcome
a partner
who is my equal”
In the words of my coworker, “those are words that you wrote well done!” and I think that sums up half of these poems
— Jul 12, 2024 10:48AM
a partner
who is my equal”
In the words of my coworker, “those are words that you wrote well done!” and I think that sums up half of these poems
A K
is on page 144 of 256
“on the first day of love
you wrapped me in the word special”
RUPI. NO.
— Jul 12, 2024 10:39AM
you wrapped me in the word special”
RUPI. NO.
A K
is on page 134 of 256
“… even to be a single thread of her cotton dress would be the greatest gift.”
going for the end of the poem now, because that one was also super beautiful and that line is actually really good in my opinion. She’s still got a lot of bad poems, but she’s definitely improving!
— Jul 12, 2024 10:37AM
going for the end of the poem now, because that one was also super beautiful and that line is actually really good in my opinion. She’s still got a lot of bad poems, but she’s definitely improving!
A K
is on page 94 of 256
“somewhere along the way
i lost the self-love
and became my greatest enemy
…”
okay, we’re turning it around now! this one is probably one of the best ones i’ve seen her write! you go girl
— Jul 12, 2024 10:31AM
i lost the self-love
and became my greatest enemy
…”
okay, we’re turning it around now! this one is probably one of the best ones i’ve seen her write! you go girl
A K
is on page 91 of 256
“let it go
let it leave
let it happen
nothing in this world
was promised or
belonged to you anyway”
…and i am immediately met with disappointment. sigh.
— Jul 12, 2024 10:30AM
let it leave
let it happen
nothing in this world
was promised or
belonged to you anyway”
…and i am immediately met with disappointment. sigh.
A K
is on page 85 of 256
“i felt beautiful until the age of twelve
when my body began to ripen like new fruit”
Rupi, you actually wrote another pretty good one! Proud of you queen
— Jul 12, 2024 10:29AM
when my body began to ripen like new fruit”
Rupi, you actually wrote another pretty good one! Proud of you queen
