Dalidja’s Reviews > The Silver Stag > Status Update
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This was entertaining enough. I enjoyed the characters, and the plot and world building were alright. There were a bunch of words and phrases used the I've never heard before in my life and have to assume were regional, but they felt especially off because this book has a lot of errors. It needed more edits. Also, why write paragraphs about directions? Boring. And there's not enough build-up for the romance.
— Jul 15, 2024 01:03PM
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