Patricia’s Reviews > Lusting for Jenna > Status Update
Patricia
is 22% done
Jfc!
It has all the ingredients to a good dark story to me, but I'm about to drop it after so many mistakes with so little written. The amount mixups with POV during conversation was too many to me. I was willing to ignore it and the other stuff, but it got Uber my skin. Which is a shame because I love me some unhinged characters in need of institutionalisation lol. If this ever get a new edition, I'll be back
— Jul 18, 2024 02:12PM
It has all the ingredients to a good dark story to me, but I'm about to drop it after so many mistakes with so little written. The amount mixups with POV during conversation was too many to me. I was willing to ignore it and the other stuff, but it got Uber my skin. Which is a shame because I love me some unhinged characters in need of institutionalisation lol. If this ever get a new edition, I'll be back
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