Kara’s Reviews > The Keeper's Flame > Status Update
Kara
is 62% done
there isn't enough internal dialogue, like she is a bundle of nerves with clammy hands, but isn't going over actual ideas or worries... makes her too simple...
— Feb 12, 2016 05:59AM
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Kara
is 63% done
no, really, goblet of fire... ummm... and everyone is weird... I don't understand why anyone is acting the way they are... and why didn't she tell everyone what she knows? does she really wanna die and curse everyone with ignorance then death?
— Feb 12, 2016 01:52PM
Kara
is 10% done
who needs sleep? I'm hooked... so maybe she is a bit more wrecked than I realised... wanna bet her magic disappeared either because her heart is broken or gaia is protecting her from something?
— Feb 10, 2016 10:19PM
Kara
is 6% done
five months later... I feel like she'd be left depressed, but maybe two chapters isn't enough to get into all that yet...
— Feb 10, 2016 09:59PM
Kara
is starting
borrowing for free, even better reviews than the first... I'm excited
— Feb 10, 2016 09:57PM
