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Sierra Rhoades
is on page 176 of 471
It has a lot of potential, the plot is good so far and the relationships make sense for the most part. I do feel like Ron and Davina’s are way to advanced for where they are right now. It’s clear that it needs more editing, the writing is telling us everything rather than showing. I also think this book would be better in first person rather than third.
— Jul 20, 2024 07:29PM
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Sierra Rhoades
is 60% done
Well it’s starting to catch more of my attention but there’s SO much telling and now nearly enough showing. One sentence in the middle of a scene tells me it’s been months up to a YEAR since a previous part, I’m getting dropped with little BIG pieces of info and I’m not getting the full view of the story. It’s like it’s skipping over everything not involving romantic drama.
— Jul 27, 2024 06:27PM
