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is 40% done
I am struggling with this.
It needs an editor, and the author's super simplistic style makes me think this was possibly originally aimed at a younger audience. There's no fluidity to conversations, everyone speaks in full sentences with few contractions and it's a slog
The political allegory is as subtle as a brick through the window and the disability narrative is iffy "Your body wants to be this way"... mmkay.
— Jul 30, 2024 04:22AM
It needs an editor, and the author's super simplistic style makes me think this was possibly originally aimed at a younger audience. There's no fluidity to conversations, everyone speaks in full sentences with few contractions and it's a slog
The political allegory is as subtle as a brick through the window and the disability narrative is iffy "Your body wants to be this way"... mmkay.
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