Cogito_ergo_sum’s Reviews > The Melier > Status Update

wow. I've never had all the furniture and decor listed so densely in a thick, long paragraph before. what is this a crime novel? are we playing spot what doesn't belong here? plot is practically non existant. boring party. out of place sex. a shopping trip? really? author needs to narrow down what her plot is and what is truly important to mention and conserve her word count to the amount needed to tell the story.

god... author doesn't grasp how addressive commas work.

punctuation errors and missing possessive apostrophes... instead of focusing on the story, you have me thinking about the lack of editing.