Kim Looby’s Reviews > Leather & Lark > Status Update
Kim Looby
is 65% done
Missed opportunities with larks sleeping problems and Lachlan forcing himself into bed with her and insist that he stays with her until she falls asleep. If this isn’t going to feature any serial killing than it at least needs the romance.
— Aug 03, 2024 12:13PM
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Kim Looby
is 60% done
Can’t tell if im crabby or if this isn’t as good as BnB.
It doesn’t have the charm of BnB. It’s very much giving Ilona Andrew’s Hidden Legacy series. It also needs editing for removing repetitive phrasing. It started off with a bang and then hasn’t gone back. I feel like nothing has happened. Not even spice.
— Aug 03, 2024 09:16AM
It doesn’t have the charm of BnB. It’s very much giving Ilona Andrew’s Hidden Legacy series. It also needs editing for removing repetitive phrasing. It started off with a bang and then hasn’t gone back. I feel like nothing has happened. Not even spice.
