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ev
is 44% done
okaaaayyy, i’ll admit, it’s growing on me…
i can’t wait for the characters to finally be in the same place together and get to work together. now we have euyn and mikail, and sora and tiyung all in rahway, so we’re just missing aeri and royo to appear.
it’s a bit too tame in the fantasy aspect somehow, but we’ll see…
— Aug 05, 2024 07:54AM
i can’t wait for the characters to finally be in the same place together and get to work together. now we have euyn and mikail, and sora and tiyung all in rahway, so we’re just missing aeri and royo to appear.
it’s a bit too tame in the fantasy aspect somehow, but we’ll see…
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ev
is 20% done
i know what my problem is. new info is simply tube-fed to us instead of shown. also, i do not like that we're being told exactly what each character, in their pov, feels. there's no intrigue, no yearning, no subtext. it's so boring! it will rather have a chara say "that made me horny" instead of showing how something made them feel subtly and tastefully. be creative! make us rotate the charas in our brains more!
— Jul 26, 2024 10:42AM
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this was sold to me as an “adult” six of crows…giirlll…
the first person narration already was so jarring, and then the fucking lore dump as we get introduced to every character…this is so wattpad fanfiction. like, i’m pretty invested to see what’s going on, but i cannot help it, all these little things just irk me…sometimes, i think i could write when i see that people eat this up.
— Jul 22, 2024 12:05PM
the first person narration already was so jarring, and then the fucking lore dump as we get introduced to every character…this is so wattpad fanfiction. like, i’m pretty invested to see what’s going on, but i cannot help it, all these little things just irk me…sometimes, i think i could write when i see that people eat this up.
