Lyn *Nomadic Worlds’s Reviews > The Girl in the Mist > Status Update

No flow, the hero is completely wooden. Too much description of unrelated things, no real connection from point A to B. Urgh. Totally skimming and zip-reading this.

This story isn't making any sense at all where it's leading and not even red herrings can account for that.

I'm on Ch09 and bored outta my mind. Wtf.