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Luen is 19% done
Story 2: Quickening

A weird man gives an orphan living with her neglectful aunt a talking rabbit that insists it’s not a rabbit.

Creepy AF. Loved it.
Aug 10, 2024 02:11AM
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Luen
Luen is 72% done
Story 9: the goat variation

The president of the United States goes to read a story book to children at a school in September of 2001.
9 months previously after his inauguration he was told about the constitutional state secret policy of rounding up and imprisoning psychics in vats to analyse their visions - they all say the same thing - something bad will happen in September.

LOVEEEEDDDDDDDDDDDDD ITTTTTTT
Dec 23, 2024 10:13PM
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Luen
Luen is 60% done
Story 7: shark god vs octopus god

Do I need to say more? Loved it

Story 8: Errata
Jeff Vandermeer, drunk, divorcee, and failed writer is paid to travel to Siberia and write a short story that is just errata from a Sci Fi story magazine. He is given two revolvers and told a man named “Gradus” will come to murder him at some point, and that the universe depends on this story. LOVED IT
Dec 10, 2024 05:06AM
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Luen
Luen is 60% done
Story 7: shark god vs octopus god

Do I need to say more? Loved it

Story 8: Errata
Jeff Vandermeer, drunk, divorcee, and failed writer is paid to travel to Siberia and write a short story that is just errata from a Sci Fi story magazine. He is given two revolvers and told a man named “Gradus” will come to murder him at some point, and that the universe depends on this story. LOVED IT
Dec 10, 2024 05:06AM
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Luen
Luen is 45% done
Story 6: fixing Hanover

Oh I loved this one so much

The twist, the flashback structure

An absolute masterclass in how to use the form of a short story to tell a complete emotional arc for your characters
Oct 28, 2024 01:47AM
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Luen
Luen is 39% done
Story 5: The predecessor

First thing I’ve read all month since post absolution depression

I LOVED it - creepy and strange, wonderfully poetic prose
Sep 29, 2024 03:19PM
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Luen
Luen is 27% done
Story 4: lost

I knew from the first mention of mushrooms this would be an ambergris reference. Only to be delighted at what transpired. I wish it was longer but I understand why it isn’t.
Aug 13, 2024 06:16PM
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Luen
Luen is 24% done
Story 3: Sonoria

A man hires a PI to find a country that doesn’t exist. The only lead he has is a postage stamp he found in his parents belongings.

Lots of promise, weird and creepy, and then it just ends? Where is the rest of it?
Aug 11, 2024 12:23AM
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Luen
Luen is 9% done
Story 1: the third bear

Great spooky monster in the woods terrorising a village story.

The monster is a borne reference?! (I already know a later story is so if this is a collection of borne stories I’ll be very happy)
Aug 08, 2024 10:38PM
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