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He says they need to talk but then right after instead of talking he's stroking her nipples. Buddy that's not what talking is?

Seriously, no one noticed that H. says "we share a father but little else" because 3 paragraphs later B. asks who L's father is like, weren't you listening? Are you dumb? Or did the writer forget she has answered that question 8 lines ago?

The author could have used some kind of tool to keep track of her own timeline, cause the characters are talking absolute nonsense