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Kate
is 4% done
I don't know that I can actually read this... The writing is - choppy at times and at others draining. This may join the DNF pile very soon!
— Mar 03, 2016 05:03PM
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Kate
is 80% done
This story has the potential inside it to be amazing - but the run on sentences, the pacing and the useless information that pours out of Robyn's mouth/brain... Oye! While I have a feeling this will be a series I really don't think I would be able to do it!!!!
— Mar 19, 2016 08:20PM
Kate
is 41% done
And we've reached the great information dump and I feel like I've been slammed with a great deal of information and no way to process it effectively. The pace is killing me. There are way too many words in the sentences and not enough periods and commas to be seen...
— Mar 17, 2016 07:32AM
Kate
is 32% done
This is painful... It could be good but it feels like the words came out and punctuation be damned!!! I shall preserve.
— Mar 16, 2016 04:45PM
