Kate’s Reviews > Supernatural Freak > Status Update

This story has the potential inside it to be amazing - but the run on sentences, the pacing and the useless information that pours out of Robyn's mouth/brain... Oye! While I have a feeling this will be a series I really don't think I would be able to do it!!!!

And we've reached the great information dump and I feel like I've been slammed with a great deal of information and no way to process it effectively. The pace is killing me. There are way too many words in the sentences and not enough periods and commas to be seen...

I don't know that I can actually read this... The writing is - choppy at times and at others draining. This may join the DNF pile very soon!