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Laurie
is 35% done
The first chapter I was totally captivated, wanting to help this girl, horrified at her situation. Then the following chapters were introducing different species, with rules, who hates who, etc, at the rate of six every second page.
— Mar 03, 2016 08:14PM
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Laurie
is 37% done
I very quickly lost track of who does what, and then even faster lost any urge to care. If one more pops up I'm done. Which is a shame. I have the feeling this author could be good, if she wasn't trying to do Lord of the Rings material in a short story manner.
— Mar 03, 2016 08:15PM
