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Overwritten, often pretentious prose drawing attention to itself.
— Mar 03, 2016 08:47PM
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Steelwhisper
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Why are 30+ single women ALWAYS shown to be pining for babies? Not everyone wants one.
— Mar 05, 2016 11:17PM
Steelwhisper
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She makes relationship plans over a guy she met twice and who doesn't even want to spend more than an hour a week on her. Ye gods. Why doesn't she do normal dates?
— Mar 04, 2016 08:39PM
Steelwhisper
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The basic idea is pure genius. Unfortunately so far I do not buy Carrie's reactions. At all.
— Mar 02, 2016 08:54PM
Steelwhisper
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Uh huh. The writing would need to be stellar to support present tense 1st POV. Unfortunately it isn't. Also unfortunately the female characters is a wimp so far and sobbing at work.
— Feb 28, 2016 10:49AM
