Charlie’s Reviews > Crown of Stars > Status Update

I really wish Knight keep a style book or have editors/betas who pick up on glaringly obvious continuity issues. I mean if you describe a scene in down to the piercings detail you can't later on say it's the first time. A few times even things in the same chapter are duplicates or with a slight difference like she forgot.

Whoever edited this is probably the same as DoV. It has the same issues.