Britt’s Reviews > Split or Swallow > Status Update

her pelvis breaks. does this author not have any friends?

mom come pick me up i’m scared

so he just barfed black liquid into her mouth. cool.

yeah maybe include a trigger warning list if you’re going to write such a graphic SA scene though.

FMC: burning hate for prince for no reason
FMC: goes on date with said prince
FMC: brings up prince’s father
Prince: “My father is heartless. I don’t want to talk about him.” (that’s all he says)
FMC: Up until an hour ago, she’d thought there was nothing redeemable about Leo. But he’d revealed his true self when he’d talked about his father. There was a person under his insufferable exterior.

HUH???

“But they were past the point of student and teacher. Now they were lovers, and Tem wanted an equal say.” — SINCE WHEN???? there is no character development, no relationship building. and now we’re lovers.

please no one judge me for this and if you know me, no you don’t. this is b a d.