Britt’s Reviews > Split or Swallow > Status Update

mom come pick me up i’m scared

so he just barfed black liquid into her mouth. cool.

yeah maybe include a trigger warning list if you’re going to write such a graphic SA scene though.

FMC: burning hate for prince for no reason
FMC: goes on date with said prince
FMC: brings up prince’s father
Prince: “My father is heartless. I don’t want to talk about him.” (that’s all he says)
FMC: Up until an hour ago, she’d thought there was nothing redeemable about Leo. But he’d revealed his true self when he’d talked about his father. There was a person under his insufferable exterior.

HUH???

“But they were past the point of student and teacher. Now they were lovers, and Tem wanted an equal say.” — SINCE WHEN???? there is no character development, no relationship building. and now we’re lovers.

The main character is nothing if not inconsistent 😍😍😍

please no one judge me for this and if you know me, no you don’t. this is b a d.