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Honest question: If the "creepy magical" mist cuts Blunder from the outside world with its salty-wimey properties, how on Earth this "kingdom" can have so much merchants and imports? I swear, I'm starting to believe this "kingdom" is inhabited by 500 people, at most... Reading this lackluster world-building attempt really takes me out completely, I'm utterly bored

"Neither of us spoke, a day apart enough time to make strangers out of us once more."

I repeat: YOU'VE KNOWN EACH OTHER FOR A DAY AND A HALF! Sweet Jesus, these interactions are so annoying and bland...

"His silence held an edge. It cut at my insides. a bitter sting. In my attempt to wound him, I had only injured myself" Girl, be for real! You've known this dude for ONE DAY, this melodrama is not necessary!

I'm definitely not gonna like this one... But I did this to myself, this is the last time I ignored my gut feeling when it comes to Booktok recommendations

This is book is... weird. It reads like a first draft, with a lot of exposition that has no businessbeing where it is, and the author tends to repeat herself a lot (I swear I read Ravyn and Destrier at least 8 times in two pages); the only positive thing is that it's a very easy read, let's see how it goes