Pati’s Reviews > Wild Heart > Status Update

Damn this really needs editing. The timeline errors just keep happening. SMH

There's absolutely no way that this would happen! No way would he go back in!! I know because I've been there and even after 30 years I had a panic attack and had trouble ever going back to the store that I ran into my abusive ex in.

There was a big timeline screw up. SMH..... Zzzzzz

And he never did dry his clothes. Apparently the author didn't feel it was important to follow through with that once he'd used it as a tool for finding Pam. SMH..... I'm glad that I bought this on sale.

He has no phone. He didn't know what time it was when he woke from his nap . Therefore implying that there's no clock in his room. So, how's he going to be sure to wake up in the morning when he needs to? ...... SMH.....

It sure would be nice to know how old Lily is. So many boring, way too in-depth descriptions of everything yet no mention of how old she is. SMH....