Mo ’s Reviews > Survivor's Guilt > Status Update

Cue shock and surprise at this unexpected development! Or, you know, not.

ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME RIGHT NOW? A character's last name just changed from one line to the next! This author has no friends. How did NOBODY catch this?

Councilor? Is she a member of the local City Council? Or is she your COUNSELOR?

Conscience/conscious. Two different things. WHERE ARE THE EDITORS/PROOFREADERS?

Contractions are our friends, people!

Somebody call the comma police.

"I watched as the tiny red flakes around his irises danced with mischief as he grinned down at me." WHAT? No, seriously...what? Red flakes? Is he contagious?

Dear God....1% in, and I'm already itching for a red pen. Here we go....