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Sharon
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I'm 55 percent done ... and I really wish someone would teach this author how to use commas and subordinate clauses. It bugs me no end, because the story would be good if it were written properly. :-/
— Nov 03, 2011 12:38PM
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Sharon
is on page 43 of 156
Oh dear. Run-on sentences, poorly constructed clauses ("she came around the corner with red hair wearing a green pantsuit" is just one example), a sick chimney (it has a flu instead of a flue), an FBI profiler who doesn't know the difference between pedophilia and ephebophilia -- and my latest pet peeve, people who say "Ok" instead of "Okay." Argh.
— Nov 01, 2011 12:25PM
