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Benjamin Dill
is 63% done
Info dump time! Mr detective man gets all the clues lined out for him now to catch up the reader for the home stretch. Point at the person we’re heading after and pull the string.
I’m GUESSING this is gonna end up with a bait and switch. Say it’s the big bad evil man, however I feel it’s gonna be Temple. She’s shady.
— Sep 11, 2024 09:50AM
I’m GUESSING this is gonna end up with a bait and switch. Say it’s the big bad evil man, however I feel it’s gonna be Temple. She’s shady.
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Benjamin Dill
is 55% done
Uuuggghhhhh. JUST so happen two guys with guns closing in on him and one falls down stepping on “something” in the street at night with nobody else around.
— Sep 11, 2024 05:01AM
Benjamin Dill
is 33% done
Well isn’t this regular old coal miner as observant as all hell?
— Sep 10, 2024 08:49AM
Benjamin Dill
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And of course his best friend, whose like his brother, is huge, muscular, handsome and perfect for whenever he needs some muscle.
— Sep 10, 2024 05:06AM
Benjamin Dill
is 20% done
Ugh, one of those stories where the main character is so clever and every other line is a zinger while every woman he comes across is incredibly attractive in some way or another.
— Sep 09, 2024 09:54AM
Benjamin Dill
is 15% done
This all seems too convenient. A cole miner is also an amateur private investigator? It’s like every like he says is a one-liner.
If I were reading this with an action physical copy I’m not sure I would be finishing it.
— Aug 30, 2024 01:26PM
If I were reading this with an action physical copy I’m not sure I would be finishing it.
Benjamin Dill
is 4% done
I’m not a fan so far. The southern twang of the verbiage is bugging me, I don’t know why. Maybe I’m feeling southern Illinois shouldn’t sound like that?
Also, Slim and Peggy? A little on the nose.
— Aug 30, 2024 09:24AM
Also, Slim and Peggy? A little on the nose.
