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M J
is 9% done
Liam makes no sense. Aiden knocks into him on accident & falls: "I was about to reach out to stop him from falling, but something stopped me instead. Once he hit the ground, I visibly winced, and my wolf whined" then after Aiden apologized Liam goes: "I forced a scowl on my face as I watched him look up at me" like why? There's no thoughts motivating him to be so antagonistic. Nothing about disliking him at all
— Sep 12, 2024 05:32PM
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M J
is 9% done
Yep DNF. MC Liam just used the r-word. When the hell was written where the author would think that's okay?
— Sep 12, 2024 05:43PM
M J
is 9% done
I think this is a DNF. Liam's describes his gf as hot as a bitch and that's it. Theyve been dating 3, tf? Also his gf is shown as a stereotyped Mean Girl, sexually forward and comes off desperate. Despite being repulsed, nauseated, and scornful of her he's still dating her, kissing her, walking her to class...just leading her on entirely. Meanwhile he's thinking about Aiden's "delicious touch" like ew dude
— Sep 12, 2024 05:41PM
M J
is 9% done
I'm really not feeling this. The characters feel very one dimensional and irrational. Human MC is ashamed of being gay and isnt publically out. There's no reasoning for his internalized homophobia. he voices how supportive his family is & his bro is protective There's no internal explanation or reflection for why he feels ashamed of being gay
— Sep 12, 2024 05:22PM
