Shannon’s Reviews > Broken by Daylight > Status Update
Shannon
is 63% done
Over halfway through this book and barely anything has happened, other than Rosalina constantly falling to her knees in anguish over one of her mates being more than 20 ft away from her. Four books in and we're still pretending that every single one of the mmc's are not her mates, hooray!!!!
— Sep 13, 2024 07:22AM
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Shannon’s Previous Updates
Shannon
is 90% done
Maybe it's just me, but I feel that it's pretty ooc for Farron to gobble up some green flame goodies from "Malekai Furiondemius", winner of the 'Worst Named Villains of 2024' contest. Perhaps I just enjoy consistent characterization!
— Sep 16, 2024 08:06AM
Shannon
is 89% done
The root of the issues with this book is the simple fact that the author’s aren’t good enough writers to pull off the epic storyline that they’re shooting for. I’m not saying that they’re terrible, but it would take someone with considerable writing skills to reign in the convoluted mess that this series has become.
— Sep 13, 2024 01:12PM
Shannon
is 28% done
So, there are two neat little “polycules” in this book: Rose/Farron/Dayton and Rose/Caspian/Keldarion. Ezryn fits into none of this, he sits outside of everything like a fourth wheel on a tricycle. This is why he should be mysteriously vanished from this series. Also, he sucks.
— Sep 12, 2024 07:15AM

