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Liz
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The explicit scenes were a bit too detailed and some points in the story were forgotten. For instance, Chasten is undressed in the middle of the woods, but no mention of seeing or needing his clothes back. George was initially in his robe when he texted Chasten, but then this is forgotten about when they meet up for the rendezvous in the woods. Inconsistencies and again, spelling and grammatical errors.
— Sep 14, 2024 04:52PM
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Liz
is on page 42 of 161
Some grammatical and spelling mistakes were found, possibly self-published. Also, characters seem very two-dimensional, static, and no dynamic characteristics or traits to make them relatable.
— Sep 14, 2024 04:29PM
Liz
is on page 20 of 161
Does not need the overly explicit chat log. It felt a little drawn out and unnecessary.
— Sep 14, 2024 03:29PM
