Amanda Trumpower’s Reviews > A Disappearance at the Bonne Nuit Hotel > Status Update
Amanda Trumpower
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I really, really wanted to like this one.
The setting was great, the time period awesome, the prologue tragic but effective. The main character was similar to others in comparable books, and I was ready for a grand time.
Unfortunately, I feel the writing needed another pass with an editor. A little too on the nose, a little too much telling instead of showing. More polish and this would’ve been great.
— Sep 14, 2024 05:41PM
The setting was great, the time period awesome, the prologue tragic but effective. The main character was similar to others in comparable books, and I was ready for a grand time.
Unfortunately, I feel the writing needed another pass with an editor. A little too on the nose, a little too much telling instead of showing. More polish and this would’ve been great.
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