Laura’s Reviews > No Return: A Contemporary Phantom Tale > Status Update
Laura
is 42% done
"Wedgwood-colored eyes" ??? Even if you hadn't just said they were blue eyes a few paragraphs ago, I still wouldn't have known about such an obscure reference to fucking chinaware! For fuck's sake!
— Sep 16, 2024 01:31PM
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Laura
is 75% done
Oh my God, this guy better fucking grovel until his lips fall off from kissing the ground she walks on. You got 100 pages to turn this sinking ship around and convince me that this is a good story.
— Sep 16, 2024 07:27PM
Laura
is 40% done
Ok, but why would somebody install a walk-in closet "at the far side" of a humongous bathroom?
— Sep 16, 2024 12:56PM
Laura
is 20% done
Why is her POV in 1st person and his is in 3rd? I don't understand! 😭
— Sep 16, 2024 07:26AM
