Alya’s Reviews > Bewitched > Status Update

Fine. The build up is good. 🌚

“My fingers trace the inscribed letters, and I form the words on my lips. “Zoginutasa vaksasava vexvava ozakosa pesaguva ekawabiw di’nasava.”
For the love of your gods, beware of me.
Beneath that is a name.
Nu’suwnusavuva Memnon. Memnon the Cursed.”

Okayyyyyy 💅🏼✨ This scene built up well. I like.

A young budding witch with Alzheimer’s 🫠 I’ll give that a five for creativity. No higher than 5 because I can foresee author just picked like, oo, a sad and a somewhat terminal condition but it won’t disfigure or make her ugly, hmm, I’ll use that.

That said, I’m already sighing since it’s a good idea but she won’t follow up on it

In my trash book reading era 🫠🙃
I’m here for the ex wife possible betrayal plot
I shall ignore everything else because L T is not a good writer of “strong” “female” “characters” but good at writing red flags as red as the blood they spill to convince you this is publishable