Kaylee’s Reviews > Heat of the Everflame > Status Update
Kaylee
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"My restraint was wearing thin".... Mine too, Diem, mine too.
I think I might have to give this book a break for a while because if Luther goes "preternaturally still" one more freaking time I might scream.
— Sep 17, 2024 03:56AM
I think I might have to give this book a break for a while because if Luther goes "preternaturally still" one more freaking time I might scream.
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Urgh, Diem... Seriously.
How are we supposed to believe that she is simultaneously so freaking naive and illogical, yet apparently so good at survival and combat? It doesn't gel for me. This book needed some serious editing - it is so overwritten - we don't need pages and pages of hints about what is happening... unlike Diem, we got it from the first paragraph about it.
— Sep 15, 2024 05:48PM
How are we supposed to believe that she is simultaneously so freaking naive and illogical, yet apparently so good at survival and combat? It doesn't gel for me. This book needed some serious editing - it is so overwritten - we don't need pages and pages of hints about what is happening... unlike Diem, we got it from the first paragraph about it.
