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Gaby
is 39% done
I’m bailing. Gregory’s writing is making me want to pull my hair out. The sentence structure is so basic and every sentence seemingly starts with a pronoun. I know it’s written in first person, but can’t we get a little creative? It seems to be developing a bit as the book goes on so I guess there’s an argument that the simplistic writing style mimics the protagonist’s sophistication (or lack thereof)?
— Sep 26, 2024 08:41PM
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