Mom Reads Romance’s Reviews > Deadly Cravings > Status Update

Not sure I can continue. I think I am over insta lust and mary sue fmc’s. Going to drop it for a bit and try again later. See my highlighted quotes for my opinions thus far. It is problematic bc there is just so much telling, Inner dialogue & already a few choppy scene changes where I couldn’t figure out wtf was going on. This author has a lot of potential. Needs better alpha/beta readers.

There’s a whole lot of telling in this book. Ugh.