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The grammatical errors on this page alone, but also overall, distract from the flow of reading. Also, I have to say that all the made up names and things and creatures, etc, it’s too much. I don’t want to have to study and commit to memory useless info (I reserve my brain space for other stuff) to make sense of what I’m reading… Alas, the story seems to have potential, so I’ll continue on for now.
— Oct 16, 2024 05:25PM
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LuLubye
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Just read through a whole page of explanations and descriptions of complicated races and descriptions only to move on from it to completely unrelated scene? Why?
— Oct 16, 2024 05:29PM
