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Toni
is 10% done
Barely passable writing. Horrible and unrealistic dialogue of the characters. Unbelievable!!! And it will only get worse as I skim med several chapters ahead - bunch of nonsense
— Oct 18, 2024 04:57AM
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Toni
is 15% done
So many unrealistic scenarios. Author doesn’t even bother to consider the possibility of historical precedent to the actual sailing - Priscilla can practically run the ship herself with her 21st century attitude.
— Oct 18, 2024 09:27AM
