Bobsome’s Reviews > Reborn: Apocalypse Volume 3 > Status Update
Bobsome
is 15% done
Just finished chapter 9, and I think the writing might be getting worse.
Kerr seems to be reaching for an anime action poetic flare, but mostly just ends up using words incorrectly, causing confusion if you actually focus on what's literally written. If you just let the sentence sit in the mishmash of nouns and adjectives you can get what they're going for, but it's very immersion breaking and halting.
— Oct 29, 2024 06:00PM
Kerr seems to be reaching for an anime action poetic flare, but mostly just ends up using words incorrectly, causing confusion if you actually focus on what's literally written. If you just let the sentence sit in the mishmash of nouns and adjectives you can get what they're going for, but it's very immersion breaking and halting.
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Bobsome
is 75% done
The writing is truly not good. It's been especially obvious in comparison to the physical books I've been reading at work.
The storytelling isn't terrible, but the word choices and sentence structure can be awful.
— Nov 05, 2024 02:41PM
The storytelling isn't terrible, but the word choices and sentence structure can be awful.
