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I get distracted by the sentences. It feels like literally translated from another language (which it probably is). They feel quite bumpy. Some repetition: i.e. she looked with curiosity and disgust; and was disgusted by. Storywise is okay, not that invested yet.
— Nov 05, 2024 02:14AM
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