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Martin
is 87% done
Brandon, you're just saying this because you suddenly realized that you're a romance novel character, LOL.
— Apr 17, 2016 01:34AM
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Martin
is 84% done
“Let’s see, you’re dating a guy in his forties, an ex-con with a gangland history and no education to speak of, a dirty old man who’s also working as a pimp, forcing hot young things to sell their cocks and arses.” - At least I'm not the only one thinking this about you, Frank.
— Apr 17, 2016 01:23AM
Martin
is 77% done
No, no, no, you can't honestly expect a reader to believe THAT story. People just cannot be this ignorant and unsuspecting. It's like this story takes place in the early 80s.
— Apr 16, 2016 11:59PM
Martin
is 70% done
You don't marry a guy to get him a visa!! Oh my god, what's wrong with these people?!
— Apr 16, 2016 11:31PM
Martin
is 54% done
What does he need that much money for?! And of course he's seducing his boss. Doesn't shed a weird light on things at all..
— Apr 16, 2016 10:36PM
Martin
is 52% done
I sure hope Brandon has a sick sister or something he needs the hooking money for, otherwise this book sails out of the window.
— Apr 16, 2016 10:28PM
Martin
is 49% done
I don't buy it. That's like saying a porn director is in love with a performer and doesn’t want him to be with other men. Tough luck. I don't see how this could ever end happily....
— Apr 16, 2016 10:20PM
Martin
is 40% done
This is the weirdest plot ever. I can't even mention what's wrong here without spoilering, but clearly this story lacks a great deal of logic - or even common sense...
— Apr 16, 2016 09:31PM

