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Jen
is on page 107 of 321
100+ pages read before sleepytime = goal achieved! I'm enjoying this story, but it's not without disjointed bits. An example: At the end of Chapter Seven (p.72), Megan frees herself from a witch and he goes over the roof instead of her. Then Chapter Eight opens with Greyson and the brothers on the roof with her. Not a problem, but for the fact that we were not told how they knew she was on the roof. :-(
— Apr 18, 2016 02:05AM
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Jen
is finished
Finished. Megan finally got her priorities straight. Presumably she and Greyson will live happily ever after. I wish I could be happy for them, but I don't like them enough to think more than that they just deserve each other.
— Apr 18, 2016 06:12PM
Jen
is on page 196 of 321
Chapters Eighteen and Nineteen were painful. Megan is an idiot and it was hard to read these chapters and see what she did and how she behaved. TSTL is the phrase that comes to mind. :-(
— Apr 18, 2016 02:56PM
Jen
is on page 22 of 321
I've managed to read only two chapters so far, but the story seems off to a good start: Megan had a meeting with an FBI Agent; and there's a meeting of the Gretnegs coming up. Should be interesting, hopefully.
— Apr 18, 2016 12:01AM
