Jennifer’s Reviews > Skyshade > Status Update

The plot itself is ... fine, but wow this should have gone through at least 2 more passes with an editor. Wrong she/he used multiple times, unclear responses in the dialogue make it hard to decipher who is actually speaking. Conversations are awkward, the writing style is akin to a middle grade story. I'm pretty sad, this story had potential but unless I'm wowed in the last 30%, this one is falling EXTREMELY flat.