Cat’s Reviews > How Gods Bleed > Status Update

I'm only 3% in, and am very intrigued. My only gripe is the verbiage. I think more synonyms could have been used; or at least things could have been worded differently. I.E. "Though his voice was clear it was obvious that the lone figure was as troubled as a rabbit when it hears the call of an owl warning that a wolf is hungry and on the prowl." Couldn't it have been "...warning that a predator was..."? IMHO