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MELANIE
is 26% done
This is not going well.
The writing is green with a lot of over-explaining, and telling instead of showing. But I expected that and it’s not bad enough to not continue the story.
What is killing me is the FMC. I CANNOT stand her. She has all the icks.
— Nov 19, 2024 09:05PM
The writing is green with a lot of over-explaining, and telling instead of showing. But I expected that and it’s not bad enough to not continue the story.
What is killing me is the FMC. I CANNOT stand her. She has all the icks.
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MELANIE
is 26% done
The FMC has me FUMING. She’s prideful and doesn’t want anyone to know her life is not “perfect”, she rather be miserable than single/alone and her 10+ y/o friends can’t tell her the truth (which she KNOWS is the truth) without fear of her cutting them out of her life.
Plus, I have not felt a single ounce of chemistry bt the MCs which makes the drunken mistake about to happen not enjoyable at all.
— Nov 19, 2024 09:08PM
Plus, I have not felt a single ounce of chemistry bt the MCs which makes the drunken mistake about to happen not enjoyable at all.
